Lyrics for an original song.. any thoughts?

Those are really strong, colorful, and powerful lyrics. I can feel what you're saying. And for a peace-y, easy-going gal like me, it was like..."WOAH! This guy's feeling the rage!" But then I went back to being chill. ^.^ Anyway, I like it. But, be aware that the lyrics might offened some people. Like I said, the song is strong. And that's what I like about it! :) Hope this helps :D